Fiction and Non-Fiction

Month: January 2022

A Successful Search

At some point in the mid 1970’s, I came across a book titled The Quiller Memorandum. As I look at the cover now, it must have been a re-release to coincide with the BBC series based on the books. A series that sadly had one season and disappeared.

I’d never heard of Adam Hall, but I was working through an espionage/spy thriller phase in my reading, waiting for the next Len Deighton, Robert Ludlum or John LeCarre to appear.

It’s a phase I’ve never really left, and Quiller looked interesting. I read the book in less than twenty-four hours, went in search of others, and Adam Hall joined the list of writers I stalked for new releases.

Somewhere in there I discovered Adam Hall was one of the pen names of Elleston Trevor, the writer of Flight of the Phoenix, about ninety other novels, plus children’s stories, stage plays, and radio plays. I read some of those, but never with the commitment and passion I’d developed for Quiller.

In 1995, I saw the reports of his passing, and had just finished Quiller Salamander, the eighteenth Quiller mission. Over the years, I’ve reread each one several times. I learn something as a writer every time, and always left wanting more, only there weren’t any.


Until in 2014, I found the book Quiller. A Profile. The book references Quiller Balalaika – the nineteenth Quiller novel, finished in the last few weeks of Elleston Trevor’s life, and published in 1996.

How did I miss that?

I searched Amazon and Abebooks, and my local stores with no success. In the years since, I occasionally run a search, with no luck.

Until this week.

There it was, available on Amazon, and I nearly broke a wrist hitting the keyboard. It’s due to arrive next week, and I’ll let you know how it turns out.

Where Words Come From

This week I started a new story in my Babylon series. It’s a little different from most of the others because the main character in this story is the priest Arioch. The beginning is in the Esagila temple complex, Babylon’s main religious center, and I was on a roll, pounding the keys as the words flowed.


About three or four hundred words later, I paused, went back to tidy up what I’d written, and stopped at one word.


Bedlam.


I’d used the word to describe Arioch’s thoughts about the noise coming from outside. For some reason it didn’t feel right, but I wasn’t sure why. On an impulse, I reached behind my desk for the dictionary in the book case and flicked to the “B’s”
According to the Oxford English Dictionary, bedlam is a corruption of Bethlehem, first used in England in the 1400’s and 1500’s in relation to the London mental hospital St. Mary of Bethlehem.


Over time, the word bedlam came to mean uproar and confusion. More importantly, it isn’t a word Arioch would have known or used.


There was a part of me that argued to leave the wording as it was. After all, how many of my readers would pick up on Arioch using a word that didn’t exist until nearly a thousand years after he lived? The thing is, I’d know, and every time I read that paragraph it would kick me out of the story, which means some of you are likely to have the same reaction.


I changed the paragraph, but Arioch’s still in trouble. Now, I just have to work out how he fixes it

First Thoughts on 2022

We’re just over a week into the year, and so far it’s a bit of a mixed bag. In terms of word count, I’m several thousand words below target for the tenth of the month. From a production perspective, I’ve completed two short stories, and have a third in flight.

If I’m going to hit the rest of my targets for January, I need to increase my word count, and two things happened this past week that were like a bat over the head. I mentioned Dean Wes’y Smith’s writing challenge last time. What I didn’t mention is the planning he did to set himself up for success.

Dean spent time in December tracking how he spent his time, and where he could find the hours for writing. The blog is here – My 2022 Challenge. In parallel, I listened to one of Joanna Penn’s podcasts, and she talked about the same thing – tracking your hours and finding time for writing.

And then it hit me.

I’ve listened to both these writers, and others, say much the same thing. I’ve never set myself up to track my time, and wondered why I couldn’t “find” extra minutes to write. I’ll let you know how the tracking goes this week, along with, potentially, two new short stories.

2022 Is Here

Well, the world made it into 2022. Not that there’s any doubt the planet would make it. As to humanity, we made it as well, with the hopes this year will be better than 2021. Travel still seems to be the lottery I mentioned last time, and I decided to hold off any decisions to see what governments did after January 1st. At the time of writing they’ve done nothing so in the next week or so, I’ll get onto the airline sites and see what they have available.

I have decided to go with the tripling my annual count of usable words. That’s usable fiction, non-fiction, and this blog. For anyone counting that’s going to be about 500,000 words for 2022. It’s a long way from the two-million plus Dean Wesley-Smith is targeting, but maybe I’ll go for that next year, or in 2024. Assuming I make it, that will be ten or more items toward that magical twenty number I talked about in early-December.

As of today, I’m about 1,500 words behind. I’m not worried about it because yesterday was spent in a lot of preparation and establishing my 2022 tracking items. Today I made a start on a short story, and have a hard copy of Death at a Wedding beside me. I’ll look through that hard copy to remind myself where I was, and get my head back into ancient Babylon. I’m not working with the day job for the next week, so I expect to make good progress.

I’m also planning to write here more regularly in 2022, so stay tuned and I’ll report on progress next week.

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